Tyros Tyris Wip untill i get on my Labtop

[vittorio1tyris]

Name: Tyros Tyris

Age: 23

Place of Birth: Volantis

Current Place of Residence: Volantis

House: House & Overlord House ((don't know if this applies to Esso's))if so the noble family of Tyris

Family:
>Lysanderdios Tyris ((Father))
> Umberta Fangoli ((im not well versed in Volanti names...))
>Tytos Tyris ((Brother))

Appearance: Tyros is a tall lean man with blood red irises and shoulder length silver hair.Blah writers block

Garb: A blood red Tunic and Black Pants ((couldn't find a fancy word for that :) ))

Height:5.8 ft.

Weight: 190lb

Personality: Tyros is a loud and boisterous man, always a man you would go drinking with however when drunk he becomes hostile and depressed and will beat the shit out of you for looking at him the wrong way. Tyros also enjoys fire spending may of his day at the fire priests temple in Volantis.

Tyros also enjoys

Likes:

• Fire
  
• Drinking
  
• Fighting
  

Dislikes:

• Westroshi
  
• snakes
  
• Dothraki
  

Weapons: in Tyros possession is a black iron bastard sword he had forged himself even though he wasn't smith he takes great pride in his mightiest craft because of its fine detail of many flame's and the onyx stone at its pommel

Armour: Tytos wears a set of finely crafted steel armour which cost him a quite big chunk of his family's fortune. His armour is mainly just a ornate chest plate with many obsidian decorations on it while the shoulders are protected by black iron dragon heads, inside of those heads is combustible material that makes it look like they are spouting fire.

His Helmet is a usual steel helmet only with far more neck protection and a nasal strip and a large red crest ((what I mean is like what the roman centurions and other officers wore on their heads, they kinda look like brooms.))

His greaves are pretty simplistic except for the great Dragon heads guarding his knees. The greaves are made up of plate and chain mail

Skills: (Is your character a warrior supreme? could your character pick the pockets of the Kingsguard and not be noticed? Is your character trained in medicine? Any special skills or knowledge here)

Great Warrior:: Tyros was brought up as warrior by his father.the little boy who would grow to be tyros loved to fight anything that would challenge him this caused quite a bit of anger from families who's child was beat up by Tyros. When he got older Tyros decide to spend some time as a mercenary fighting for fame and fortune this brought him all over Essos and even a few times to Westeros.

Nobleman: Tyros was a son of a rich nobleman in Volantis, and when his father died his brother being sensible and loving to his younger brother split the wealth with him giving him almost limitless funds to spend drinking himself to death. this has also has caused him to become arrogant.

Great Friend : Tyros has always been a good friend and a bad enemy to have during his childhood his friendship was almost exclusive to his brother Tytos ,But as he grew up and joined his mercenary group he had made friends with many people. and when he returned to Volantis he made friends with many and I mean many brothel and tavern owners.

Weaknesses: Flaws in body & mind that make all people less then perfect

Drunkard: Much like king Robert Tyros has a n obsession with whores and drinking he often forces his timid brother into doing it with him. This has caused a slight distain that Tytos has for Tyros habits and every time he dose this Tytos implores him to stop it and sober up and every time he just gets dragged down anyways .

History:

RP Sample:

++OOC Info++

Player: A name or nickname we can refer you to by Vittorio
Other characters played: None
Any plans in mind for the character? Personal Plot perhaps? Fucking around :P
Do you agree to the rules: of course
Who invited you to the site?

[vittorio1tyris]

Any Things so far?

[Halaevia Baratheon]

Not an official review as you haven't finished, but a couple of points as you've asked for feedback:

- Careful with the formatting of the application, you've got a few runaway italics tags!
- Please try to limit your ((OOC comments)) in your finished application. They're fine for your reference while you're working on it. Like with his helmet, just describe it to us - 'He wears a steel ridge helmet with a nasal strip and a distinctive tall crest of dyed red horsehair' or however you want to put it.
- When you've finished you'll need to give it a proofread for spelling, punctuation and grammar. If you'd like any help with this, let me know.

Other than that, he's a character with potential. I'd like to see a little more depth to him, but hopefully that'll come out in his history. If he's got a serious drink problem, how has that impacted on his mercenary work? Has it damaged his reputation? Also if you're going to have a character obsessed with fire enough to spend a lot of money incorporating it into his armor, he ought to have a good reason for that! I'd like to see his personality extended - what's he like when he's not drunk? There's got to be more to him than 'drinks and fights a lot' even if those characteristics are what someone would first notice about him.

I look forward to reading your finished application! :)

[vittorio1tyris]

Thanks!